Rough Cut.

Here is our rough cut which we managed to make just in time.
Here are the good and bad points our classmates said:

POSITIVE

- Clear, structured storyline
- Blonde girls we have used are effective
- Good collarge of faces- effective
-Good use of camera shots


NEGATIVE

- Not alot of action
- No clear plot apart from serial killer
- Public stares at camera?
- Too many mid shots

Title/Cast Names To Use.

Credit list for thriller- for future reference if needed!!


A.Royalty Production presents
A..HPLR..Film
(Cast) Holly Oko
(cast) Nathan Simpson
(cast) Andrea Thorne
Costume design by ...Rita West
Art Direction...Josh Ferguson
Production Design...James Mack
Casting...Janet Turner
Film Editing.... by Tom Wilson
Cinematography...Carrie Knowles
Orignal Music...Kathy Gillard
Produced....Toby Hart
Director....Jonathon Hawkins
Main title.. The Pursuer

shot list

In todays lesson we are adjusting the pictures we have got for our board that will feature in our thriller, as well as making a shot list that we will use as a reference while we are shooting our piece.

our shots as follows:
shot 1- locating the victim in market square ~close up, zoom out

shot 2- shot of the girl (victim)~mid-shot

shot 3- following the victim out of market square to alleyway~zoom in, follow victim

sot 4- victim walking down alleyway~long shot

shot 5- closeup of victim down alleyway~stalker point of view, mid shot

shot 6-the girl in alleyway~zoom in

shot 7-picture board 1~zoom in, moving shot

shot 8- the girl turning around~side shot

shot9- missing poster~zoom in

shot 10- picture board 2~moving, zoom, long shot

shot 11- newspaper clippings~zoom in, move in

shot 12- words~ closeup

shot 13- picture of a girl-past victims~zoom in, move in

shot 14- girl running into lift~long shot

shot 15- from inside the lift~point of view shot

shot 16- hand stopping lift~point of view shot

shot 17- zoom in of hand~zoom in (END SHOT)

laters keep it gangsta G'sxxxx
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Group Photo!

Images

We have been looking for images to use for our board, we will use these images in our sequence. Pictures we are looking for are picture of young girls which our stalker will follow, mug shots, famous people and also newspaper clippings.
We are going to go for a typical blonde young girls. We will also go out and take pictures of girls that we know to use also.

E.g
A typical blonde girl, just her face.

Todays Lesson<3

In todays lesson we are going to develop our soundtrack even further to create a more eery feel to the overall effect of our thriller. We now know when we are going to begin filming our thriller and are currently deciding on the locations we want to film at.
So Far we have chosen
-Town Center(market square)
-Car Park(Lion Yard)
-Alleyway By the backs of Queens/St Johns Colleges
We have decided on these 3 locations so far because we need a busy bustly area for the opening sequences and the car park for the lift scene. The alleyway will add drama and tension to the opening for when the stalker is following his victim, we need to to make a big impact on the audience.

Love from the girls=)