Rough Cut.

Here is our rough cut which we managed to make just in time.
Here are the good and bad points our classmates said:

POSITIVE

- Clear, structured storyline
- Blonde girls we have used are effective
- Good collarge of faces- effective
-Good use of camera shots


NEGATIVE

- Not alot of action
- No clear plot apart from serial killer
- Public stares at camera?
- Too many mid shots